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I (Amber) was given the article about Leanne's business Lelly Jewellery to write. I thought of a few questions to ask Leanne and I then sent them to her in an email, Leanne then answered all the questions and sent them back to me so I could start on the article. I had asked quite a few questions and therefore got a lot of text for the answers. I started writing the article and realised that it was going to be extremely lengthy, once I had completed the magazine I sent it to Leanne to proof read and to put it onto the page layout. Once Leanne had proof read it she emailed me saying it was too long and that it needed shortening. I got straight to work shortening the article and sent it back, unfortunately it was still to long, I ended up shortening it 5-6 times. I really didn't think I could shorten it anymore without taking a question out so Leanne had the idea of getting Tom (Leanne's boyfriend) to have a look at it. Tom then had a go of writing the article again with the information and text I had sent to them. 

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